faces. blurred. heated lights.
bodies. unified. summer nights.
colors. movement. music plays.
heartfelt. emotion. she sways.
beat. rhythm. eyes closed.
feeling. lust. passion exposed.
pills. bottles. innocence lost.
blood. pain. skin embossed.
laughter. money. no receipts.
tears. shame. soiled sheets.
4 comments:
aweee, it's sooo pretty.
i love how you make it outragously hard to understand what is going on.
love.♥
i didnt get it maybe cuz i am not deep like dat lol. maybe an explanation would help me out jus lil bit. thanks
halleluiah holla back
much love
Ash
I'm guessing its about a party or a dance, or going clubbing and bringing someone home...but thats just a guess. let me know what it's really about.
I like that your poem isn't easy to understand. I think that sometimes, that's how poetry should be. Like beauty, poetry is in the eye of the beholder. It has an amazing ability to become what the writer wants, and yet also be what the reader wants.
Keep it up!
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